J. Haux

Going good! :D I'm especially enjoying Rupo. You just have a few grammar mistakes, but I'll let someone else point some out. If you want me to anyway, just tell ...

The British needed a way to pay for the French-Indian war...I think they went in debt. So they (of course) had to tax their citizens more. And most of the ...

*cough* ...proofread, please. There are several grammatical errors. The most prominent among them: dialogue punctuation. I think it's just because you aren't aware of it... Unless it's a proper noun, ...

Jenna, this is exciting and original. I like the way it's developing. :D But...ouch! Spelling! It's not my strongpoint either, but if you ran spellcheck it would catch most of ...

You know what's funny? Some friends and I did exactly the same thing...most of it anyway. We did it with Harry Potter too, only it was a musical. :wink: ~Jacquie~

Ooo...really? You want us to? *evil laugh* Ah...I'll get to it later...It's late. I will say you need to learn proper dialogue punctuation. It's something people don't seem to know, ...

Who wants to bet that Empire will have a black dragon on the front? Did anyone else think that Thorn was a disappointing name for a dragon? And why was ...

I love the twist at the end. :D You had me fooled and relieved at something other than a suicide story. Great job. I also like the title. It really ...

Aha! I thought you were a poet! I liked this, especially because I love storms and lightning (even though I'm afraid of it 8- as much as she did. She ...

they sound a little that how British guys really are? I could probably have answered that...ha ha! :D I love it! Ha ha! I think this is my favorite one ...

Agree. :D I'll read back over it later. Right now I need a lot of sleep. One thing: Please don't...don't...jerk us back to reality by talking at the end. Maybe ...

I love those guys! :D I didn't get that paragraph either, until I read it again. She's looking at the house across the way, remember? And she saw him disappear--that's ...

Very good. You've roused my curiosity. :D “Kitten.” A voice whispered in her ear like a soft breeze on a warm summer’s day.. The hallway was deserted except for the ...

Yes-do clarify that she's not human. I knew because I *cough* scrolled down and glanced at your comment. Your descriptions are beautiful. I second *singsoffkey*, though, on the electric vs. ...

There wasn't a lot of action in this chapter. You gave us a little info about the dad (possible foreshadowing?) and some questions raised. Did he know about her power? ...